The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000
The bar charts illustrate the regional distribution of world population in two specific year : 1900 and 2000.
Overall, in both two of the researched years, citizens of Asian accounted for the majority of the population, making up 60% and 54% in 1900 and 2000 respectively.
Regarding to the represented charts, there was a decrease in the number of people living in asia (asia Pacific) and europe - the two biggest population areas. To be more specific, percentage of global citizens in asia and europe declined by approximately 6% for the former and 11% for the later. However, they still remained their ranks as the most two massive population regions compared to the others.
Interestingly, in 2000, various regions significantly developed their population, namely africa, latin america & caribbean, middle east & north africa. Together with the increasing of 6% of africa’s population proportion, despite not being mentioned in 1900 research, the two other in the mentioned list above appeared on the 2000 chart with 8% (latin america & caribbean) and 6% (middle east & north africa). north america’s population prevailed consistency with 5% of the total.
- Some people think that employers should ensure a supportive and pleasant work environment where each employee is respected and valued equally while others think employers should focus instead on providing better facilities and equipment. 84
- The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000 78
- The bar chart shows the percentages of the UK workforce in five major industries in 1841 and 2011 68
- With the increasing demand for energy sources such as oil and gas should people looking for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas 96
- Some people think that employers should ensure a supportive and pleasant work environment where each employee is respected and valued equally while others think employers should focus instead on providing better facilities and equipment 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: asia
...rease in the number of people living in asia asia Pacific and europe - the two biggest po...
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Line 7, column 412, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: North
...bean and 6% middle east & north africa. north america's population prevailed con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46408839779 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08822487671 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618784530387 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1511241323 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.625 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181727676455 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863265840122 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873391029269 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133739201899 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981662378642 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.