The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart depicts how the six major area of the world use water for various purpose in sectors like agriculture, industry and domestic use.
Overall from the graph we can say that the agriculture sector in central asia consumes the maximum amount of water whereas Europe consumes the least. Also, north America intakes the largest amount of water for industrial use and central Asia uses the least.
If you see the chart Asian and Africans use more than eighty percent of the water for agriculture. In south America water is most widely used for agriculture it constitutes around 71% of the water.
In contrast to this north Americans and Europeans use the water significantly for industrial 48% and 53% respectively. Africa and central asia being the least. Total of the amount of water used by both the countries (Africa and central asia) is 12 percent which is equal to the water consumption of south east asia for industrial usage. South America uses 10% of water for industrial purpose.
Water for domestic purpose is used predominantly in south America and Europe (19% and 15% respectively). Central Asia and south east Asia use the same amount for water for domestic use that is about 7%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 137, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Asia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
...ively. Central Asia and south east Asia use the same amount for water for domestic ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53889391557 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1098436519 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1818181818 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228283747889 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118877270385 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073429755491 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171483529683 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729618893852 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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