The pie charts illustrate the proportion of water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
As can be seen, the amount of water used for agriculture is highest in most countries in the world. Additionally, while the percentage of water used by the population is lowest in the San Diego Country and California, the rest of the world is for industrial use.
In terms of water usage for farming, in San Diego Country and plenty of other countries the proportion is 60% and 69%, much higher than California. If the remaining group of countries has the highest amount of water used for agriculture in the world, in contrast, industry accounts for only 8%, it is a quarter of that of California.
It is clear that in California the water usage for residential is lowest for industry or for farming but it is highest in the world at 28%. The amount of water that Californians use is 5% higher than the rest of the countries and 11% higher than the San Diego country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56818181818 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6860280901 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426136363636 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0298674522 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.456691333063 0.215688989381 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.296115418117 0.103423049105 286% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.294056410517 0.0843802449381 348% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.432958261106 0.15604864568 277% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.327404639769 0.0819641961636 399% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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