The Pie Charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries China and India
The pie chart illustrates the information regarding the percentum of the average consumption of food in the globe with contrast to two other Nations in given year.
As can be witness from the given information that, in the Global the processed food was 41% is higher than the nuts and seeds.whereas, the minor difference was observed in the count of vegetables and fruits and animal food.
Furthermore,the processed food was higher consumed in the China and in India.moving head,there was a minor difference was observed in the count of nuts and seeds between two nations in given year.after that, the count lead double in the case of animal food in India.moving further, the vegetables and fruits was higher count of percentum in the case of China in 2008
Overall,the percentage of processed food was higher in the globe,China and in India in 2008.whereas,the less percentage was witnessed in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, regarding, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1015480006 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446666666667 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.686780301 43.030603864 359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.0 112.824112599 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.0 22.9334400587 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 5.23603664747 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235426719876 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165832530932 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838037434223 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15732804402 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716367728017 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 13.2329268293 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.3012195122 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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