The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts reveal the information about electricity generated in Germany and France from renewables sources during the year of 2009. The data is calibrated in per centuim. The data is clear and coherent.
It can be seen that in Germany electricity generated from renewable sources was17. 4% and nuclear was 23.0%.Apart from all this electricity generated from solar that was 6.1% only. Moreover, electricity generated from biomass. wind and hydroelectric was 39.3%,36.9%and17.7%respectively.
As far as, trend was concerned with France. The conventional thermal produced electricity was 10.3%,and renewables was fall as compared to Germany and became 13.7%.Furthermore, electricity generated from hydroelectric, wind. Biomass had been80. 5%,10.5%and 8.1% respectively.
Overall, it is evident that the total output of Germany had 560 billions kwh during the year of 2009. In France total output had been fall and became 5 10 billions kwh. The output of Germany was highest as compared to France.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... The data is calibrated in per centuim. The data is clear and coherent. It can be...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Apart
...sources was17. 4% and nuclear was 23.0%.Apart from all this electricity generated fro...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wind
...er, electricity generated from biomass. wind and hydroelectric was 39.3%,36.9%and17....
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...as compared to Germany and became 13.7%.Furthermore, electricity generated from hydroelectr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65562913907 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.78015194192 2.65546596893 142% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549668874172 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9067309237 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7857142857 22.9334400587 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284139455211 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957541690805 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122579377092 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184863446394 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912043588125 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.36 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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