In many countries woman no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring you which extent do you agree.
Marriage is a social custom, which connect the two families or persons and main way to develop new generation. With the modernisation of the world life style of person, have totally changed. Today assert topic is that do woman have never felt need to marriage because they are self dependent? Actually, I am totally agree with the statement, and try to present my view.
Firstly there is serval reasons to believe that if we saw background history of the world, where woman could not go anywhere, and only took care of her family and children. But with the passage of the time, people thinking much changed now. As well as they have all rights like others. Women are aware now and do work or job. The good illustration would be a survey conducted by Delhi government, 8out of 10 women work in government sector. Only 2%men are literate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 148.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67567567568 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46561451379 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.736486486486 0.561755894193 131% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8053824286 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117764295249 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405941701078 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501484456479 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872325044153 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101370222802 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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