In many countries, women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree?
It is true that with the strong development of modern society, marriage seems to become insignificant for females in many regions of the world. Furthermore, many individuals think that success and independence in work and life give them financial autonomy without support of marriage. From my point of view, I disagree with this statement that besides financial problem, there are some other reasons for this mindset.
To begin with, the promotion of gender equality for fair education gradually changes women’s perception about setting a family. It is because their intellectual and knowledge improvements will bring them many valuable opportunities as well as important positions in competitive society. Moreover, progressive ideology helps women overcome prejudices and standards of humanity to pursue their own goals. For example, in Western countries especially the US, according to a recent study, the majority of women who do not want to get married are said to want to gain more achievements at work and get higher education.
The next reason for an increase in this thought among women is freedom. Indeed, social norms have always stipulated that they must do housework, take care of children and obey all decisions of their partner. Therefore, with this mentality, a large number of females absolutely think that they lose their freedom and are bound to the invisible rules of the family. As a result, more and more women are not interested in looking for a male partner because of those ties.
To sum up, with the developing world, entering in legal relationship becomes an inconsequential choice in every girl’s life because of her financial independence, freedom-loving as well as open-minded and progressive thinking. It is advisable that women should make the most informed decisions to gain recognition and happiness in later life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...artner. Therefore, with this mentality, a large number of females absolutely think that they lose...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, as well as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33788395904 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96782357907 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62457337884 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0387386379 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216713253172 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693459136567 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296725116944 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118523525623 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520398533138 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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