The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data

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The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts elucidate the nutritional consistency of two distinctive dinners, which are Medium baked potato and Macaroni.
Overall, the colossal amount of carbohydrate will be in the content of Macaroni, whilst protein with carbohydrates plays presumably an equal role in the nutritional consistency of Medium baked potato.
To begin with, saturated fat made up the lowest amount that is only 10 percent in the dinner of baked potato, when the other nutrients consist of just 5 percent in Macaroni, and saturated fat will be 21 percent in this meal. A significant point is the other nutrients and glucose can be found in the same quantity by 15 percent in a baked potato, then, glucose and protein made up 11 percent in Macaroni respectively.
Moreover, sugar and protein will be added to a baked potato total of 60 percent out of 100, by 35 and 25 percent consecutively, while 52 percent carbohydrates consist of a huge amount of Macaroni.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, then, while, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95597484277 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95877025589 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.5046265462 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.6 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0832170493418 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06357355361 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634861251973 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751940887379 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640630502803 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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