Plan A below shows the ground floor of a partcular art gallery in 2005. Plan B shows
the same area in the present day.
The pictures illustrate the changes in the ground floor of a particular art gallery from 2005 to present.
Overall, it is clear that while some features remain unchanged, there have been some substantial renovations in the layout of the gallery, which mostly took place on the left side of the ground. A number of existng features have been converted, while a number of new facilites have been added to the building in general.
In 2005, there were a series of steps leading to the main entrance, which have been redesigned with an addition of smooth ramp for people who use wheelchairs. Furthermore, the reception area has been altered from the retangular desk to a circular one and moved to the center of the entrance hall. The fourth exhibition room at the south-east of the area in 2005 has been replaced by an interactive children’s area, which is not totally isolated from the hall.
Looking at the plans in more details, part of the fourth exibition room and the gallery office have been renovated into a single room where temporary exhibitions take place. There were café and shop at the upper right side of the area, which is now a gallery shop with a row of vending machines at the front. The stairs to the upper floor have been narrowed to half of initial size in order to install a new lift.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68831168831 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53195317972 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9614473412 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1215552446 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565547799482 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620410104941 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942663424938 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726617591051 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.