The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The map compares the current site of a particular university's sports center with its layout after the projected plans for development.
Overall, it is clear that the main changes for the future involve the destruction of the two outdoor courts to make way for the expansion of the main building and the addition of many facilities inside the newly extended building to diversify the activities taken indoors.
At the present, the sports center's main building has two large outdoor courts located to both the West and East sides of it. At the center of the main building, we can see a reception desk. Behind it, there was a 25m swimming pool, which is close to a seating area in its West, a changing room area in its south, and the gym in its North.
After the redevelopment, it is apparent that the two outdoor courts will no longer exist and the main building will have been expanded tremendously to East and West. Most of the original features inside the building will remain intact, except for the gym, which will double in size and connect with two new dance studios stretching along the East wall. A sports hall will also be constructed next to the gym and the seating area, opposite a café and another changing room in the southwestern corner. Regarding the Eastside, a large leisure pool will be constructed next to the original changing room to complement the old 25m pool. This leisure pool will be close to another newly-constructed changing room in the northeastern corner and a sports shop.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...rojected plans for development. Overall,it is clear that the main changes for the ...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...re was a 25m swimming pool, which is in close proximity to a seating area in its West, a changi...
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Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...inside the building will remain intact, with the exception of the gym, which will double in size and ...
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Line 4, column 366, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...udios stretching along the East wall. A sports hall will also be constructed next to t...
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Line 4, column 684, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a newly-constructed' or 'another newly-constructed'.
Suggestion: a newly-constructed; another newly-constructed
...ool. This leisure pool will be close to an another newly-constructed changing room in the northeastern corne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79104477612 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71036310605 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503731343284 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5088777681 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.4 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147264591491 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727678633232 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714869699869 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107728187175 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996924402263 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.