The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university
The maps illustrate two distinct types of rooms in an Australian dormitory, namely single room and couple room which is suitable for the pupil. It can be witnessed that the equipment in the couple room overwhelms the single room.
In terms of room size, while the length of the two following rooms is similar, the width of the pair room doubles the single one which is 4 meters and 2 meters respectively. Despite the tremendous size and being doubled the single room, the hiring fee per week of the pair room equals seven-fourths to the single room which is 350$ and 200$ correspondingly. The cost of the room is immensely affordable for pupils, especially for overseas students.
Regarding the facilities and design in two kinds of rooms, while the couple room possesses a table and chairs merely near the center of the room, the single room with the more minor size is not able to own one. Moreover, according to the illustration maps, the upper area consists of a bed which is opposite the main door separated by a pair of cupboards stratified approximately similar to the allocation of furniture of the single room, except the TV, bookshelf, and kitchen. As the presentation of the model of two kinds of rooms, the kitchen of the pair room is located on the same side with the entrance door, whereas the kitchen in the single room is set among the length of the room and combines with the bedroom to make up an insignificant corridor towards the hall.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$350'.
Suggestion: $350
...ven-fourths to the single room which is 350$ and 200$ correspondingly. The cost of t...
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Line 2, column 337, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...hs to the single room which is 350$ and 200$ correspondingly. The cost of the room i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6953125 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68803364978 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5078125 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.9749075378 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.25 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304750521278 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173423642782 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073864310416 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247683503458 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479272869198 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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