At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of old people.
Do advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Having a youth as a majority of population has beneficial for nation particularly this days, compared older population as a major. In my opinion, I think that large work force is wildly banifit nation dispait some challenges.
on the positive side younger people is power of country because only they can able to work and be the backbone of nation. In development of nation requires good military, innovative scientist, workers to builed things, to achieved all of it requires people that can able to work. So if nation has large number of working force than that nation has possibility in future to be grate nation. For example India has 35 percent of its population between 20 to 35 by only this factor think tanks clem that India will be a super power before 2050. that is how immportant factor younger generation play in any nation.
On the negative side nation has huge amount younger people but it can not do anything to increase their resources. Every adult need a job to survive and land for home and food to eat but this factor can not be changed by nation it self like nation can not increase its leadmass to grow plant for food. Also for job and food many people has to face migrate towards other nations, for example Indian students want oversea for masters after that just stay there for bright currier. While some say this migration also help mother nation to build soft power on other nation.
To recapitulate, in my view the key to succes or bright nation is their youth and having Tham as a major is dream comes true for nation. Just look at india for instance it has face many problem in providing work for that much population but at the end it worked in favour of India.
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- in spite of advantages in made in agriculture many people around the world still hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 56
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people Do advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 304.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53947368421 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27395679409 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 106.607317073 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516447368421 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 283.868780488 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 304.0 22.4926829268 1352% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1380.0 112.824112599 1223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 304.0 22.9334400587 1326% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 100.0 5.23603664747 1910% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106106512833 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106106512833 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755432610029 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028545721765 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 152.0 13.2329268293 1149% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -228.62 61.2550243902 -373% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 120.7 10.3012195122 1172% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.53 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.83 8.06136585366 271% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.4329268293 525% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 123.6 10.9970731707 1124% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 11.0658536585 542% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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