in spite of advantages in-made in agriculture many people around the world still hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
This last two dacads has innormus amout of innovation and devlopment in filed of farming, like pastisieds and seeds but countable amount of population is still starving for food. This is due to many reasons like cost of food and people has no money to buy it althou this problems can be resove with the help of government and devloped nation.
Sleeping with empty stumc is painfull, unforchunatly this is not a problem for country or any community but this is a problem of humanity. This is has countless reasons former one is cost of food. advancment in farming resulted in high prices because farmer has first brout spcial seeds wiht perticuler subtances and bried, than harvest it with spacial micanical eqvipments. This all cost icrease price of food. Latter issue is that most of the food less people does not have job to earn the money so as thay do not have money to by the food. this is the case in thired world countrys mostly in african and south american continat.
humanity can solve this problems so no one sleepes empty stumc, this can achive by working to gether. If governmet helps farmers in buy seed and equipments than cost of food can be redused. For example, governmet provaed costly equipments with loan and tex free seeds. It will benifit for costcuting food price. In addition to that, if devloped nation can help devloping ones by shifting their manufachuring units, this creats job for that country and as a result people have job than thay have money for buying food.
To recapitulat, starving for food is hears reality but in future it wouled be an problem because everybody will have a job to fill their bally, this will be posibale because every one is working on it.
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people Do advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 56
- in spite of advantages in made in agriculture many people around the world still hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 56
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people Do advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd people has no money to buy it althou this problems can be resove with the help of...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...t of the food less people does not have job to earn the money so as thay do not hav...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...t if devloped nation can help devloping ones by shifting their manufachuring units t...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...hat country and as a result people have job than thay have money for buying food ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ears reality but in future it wouled be an problem because everybody will have a j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63210702341 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3818016394 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501672240803 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 299.0 20.2975951904 1473% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1385.0 106.682146367 1298% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 299.0 20.7667163134 1440% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 64.0 7.06120827912 906% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228028793776 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228028793776 0.084324248473 270% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159213411901 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400313709154 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 149.9 13.0946893788 1145% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -215.09 50.2224549098 -428% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 117.5 11.3001002004 1040% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.05 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.9 8.58950901804 255% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 121.6 10.1190380762 1202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 122.0 10.7795591182 1132% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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