At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of old people.
Do advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Having a youth as a majority of population has beneficial for nation particularly this days, compared older population as a major. In my opinion, I think that large work force is wildly banifit nation dispait some challenges.
on the positive side younger people is power of country because only they can able to work and be the backbone of nation. In development of nation requires good military, innovative scientist, workers to builed things, to achieved all of it requires people that can able to work. So if nation has large number of working force than that nation has possibility in future to be grate nation. For example India has 35 percent of its population between 20 to 35 by only this factor think tanks clem that India will be a super power before 2050. that is how immportant factor younger generation play in any nation.
On the negative side nation has huge amount younger people but it can not do anything to increase their resources. Every adult need a job to survive and land for home and food to eat but this factor can not be changed by nation it self like nation can not increase its leadmass to grow plant for food. Also for job and food many people has to face migrate towards other nations, for example Indian students want oversea for masters after that just stay there for bright currier. While some say this migration also help mother nation to build soft power on other nation.
To recapitulate, in my view the key to succes or bright nation is their youth and having Tham as a major is dream comes true for nation. Just look at india for instance it has face many problem in providing work for that much population but at the end it worked in favour of India.
- in spite of advantages in made in agriculture many people around the world still hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 56
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people Do advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 56
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people Do advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53947368421 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27395679409 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516447368421 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 304.0 20.2975951904 1498% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1380.0 106.682146367 1294% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 304.0 20.7667163134 1464% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 100.0 7.06120827912 1416% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106106512833 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106106512833 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755432610029 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028545721765 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 152.0 13.0946893788 1161% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -228.62 50.2224549098 -455% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 120.7 11.3001002004 1068% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.53 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.83 8.58950901804 254% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 123.6 10.1190380762 1221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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