The process below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

Essay topics:

The process below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

The given diagram illustrates how salmon grow in detailed steps.

Overall, there are three main stages in the life of the whole process starting with eggs and ending at mature fish.

First of all, salmon begin their life cycle from eggs. Female salmon lay eggs in reeds and small stones in the upper river where the flow is slow. Salmon'eggs stay there about five to six months before hatching. The newly born salmon are known as fry with a size from three to eight centimeters. Then, they follow the fast flowing to the lower river and live there nearly four years before turning into smolt which are from twelve to fifteen centimeters in length. Subsequently, these smolt migrate to the ocean and stay in the open sea roughly five years until they become mature fish. Finally, these adult salmon which are from seventy to seventy-six centimeters in size swim back to their birthplace and lay eggs. As the salmon mature, a life cycle begins again.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this smolt' or 'these smolts'?
Suggestion: this smolt; these smolts
...en centimeters in length. Subsequently, these smolt migrate to the ocean and stay in the op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7696969697 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14089568719 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8461666934 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186704832124 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820474334479 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787008542378 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116812636928 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402493346619 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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