The proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets
The two pie charts compare the differences in the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three diets namely average diet and healthy diet for sport. Overall, as can be seen from the charts that carbohydrates contribute the largest percentage in all type of diets, while fat just accounts for a small amount. Units are measured in percentage.
Sportspeople require a meal with the highest proportion of carbohydrates, at 60% compared to that of an average diet and a normal healthy diet, just 40% and 50% respectively. The second largest element is protein and an average diet consist of the largest amount of protein, with makes up to 40% it was then followed by the percentage of 30% of the protein in a healthy diet and the figure for a health sports diet is 5% lower than the former.
Fat, the last compound surveyed constitues exactly one fifth in both normal and health diets. However, the figure drops to just 15% for the healty sports diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78915662651 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74067256495 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.186370985 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404693883231 0.215688989381 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167050098842 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.188709720787 0.0843802449381 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254933150106 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127932241532 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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