The Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
The table compares the four different schools in terms the number of pupils for secondary schools over a period of nine years.Over all;it is clear that the community schools most popular schools destination in the years 2000 and 2009 However;the voluntary -controlled schools earned by far the most revenge over the same period in 2009;58%pupils attend community schools and the voluntary -controlled schools was the second schools with 52%pupils . spending by pupils join schools increased in voluntary _controlled schools it was 38%in 2005 ; on the other hand; community schools and voluntary controlled schools were the same number approximately voluntary schools was 20%in 2009 and community schools was 32%in 2005.interestingly ; despite falling number of pupils was specialist schools and Grammar schools; they have 12%in 2000and 2009 more over;they used of the smallest numbers pupils per year;compared with two school s above;the least porpotion is10%in specialist schools it was in 2009 . While Grammar schools the number rise in 2000 24%porpotion
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66455696203 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99217212749 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.397466609 43.030603864 491% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 298.333333333 112.824112599 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6666666667 22.9334400587 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.23603664747 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271721658006 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195811230355 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745672936869 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271721658006 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.6 13.2329268293 239% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.3012195122 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.44 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.4329268293 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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