Several advantages of playing sport games
Nowadays, more and more children get some serious diseases such as diabetes, obesity and so on. Moreover, they are suffering an increasing pressure from studying. Therefore, parents encourage their children to participate in more physical activities because they believe that these activities can help both a physical and a mental health of children be improved significantly. This essay will present several advantages of playing sport games.
The most important benefit is that taking part in sport activities helps children stay a fit and have a good health. When children play sports, a large amount of calories can be burnt; therefore, a great deal of excess fat which is harmful for health is released from their bodies. Meanwhile, they can avoid some dangerous diseases such as diabetes or heart attack.
Besides, playing sports helps children achieve a balance in their lives. Today, they must learn such a lot that they feel tired with huge number of exercises, so some can take great emotional stress. To evade this problem, children should be encouraged to join physical activities because these activities make them feel more relax.
Finally, children’s teamwork skills can be dramatically enhanced thanks to participating in sports. For example, when children play in a football match, they have to get on well with their teammates in order to become winners. Sometimes, they have to learn how to stay calm before unfair- play competitors.
In summary, playing sports helps children become healthier, happier and more successful. Therefore, they should be promoted in participating in physical activities.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44881889764 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81567360609 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57874015748 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4951473813 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2666666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147819551113 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689095506498 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114764994649 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940363901308 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305081564766 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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