Some developing countries invite large multinational companies to open offices and factories in order to help their economy.However, others feel that the foreign companies should be shut out and instead the government should help local companies to contribute to economic growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is always said that, the growth or development of economy of any country is largely dependent on its relationship with other countries since, different currencies flow in a country largely effects its capital to a great extent. Hence, I always agree with setting up of multinational companies which creates a basic trend and culture that always helps in euphoria of more cash inflow. In this essay, some of the positive and negative points are discussed along with the conclusion based on the brighter sides.
First of all, inviting foreign countries is nothing but building a trade relationship between them in a stronger way for a longer run. This enhances the job prospects for most of the people in surrounding areas which boosts the real estate and other businesses that depends on them. Apart from this, increase in these organizations, brings their culture and tradition to the nation which in turn improves people surrounding them.
Apart from this, the goals and standards of foreign companies creates a new rules for the native companies, which in term develops the local companies to compete with the multinational standards which in-turn helps them to grow their setup in other countries. Hence, it boosts the revenue of the nation to the larger extent.For example, due to booming of large international IT companies to our nation, has significantly improved the job prospects in a major way in last 15 years.
But some claim that, origin of these multinational companies has destroyed the culture of people which is primarily depends upon nature of an individual not on to blame on these companies.
On weighing both the side of arguments, advantages always far exceeds the disadvantages on setting up of these companies. Hence I agree in establishing this companies due to all these bright views.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, apart from, for example, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 965.302439024 158% => OK
No of words: 298.0 196.424390244 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12751677852 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84756804217 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 106.607317073 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2709090593 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.909090909 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208662133456 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752392385012 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614186451984 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11280141826 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623821183016 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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