Life is full of experience and vicissitudes and this is us whether choose be an adventurer or accept the probable problems of a failure. Therefore, people may accept a failure or use it as an experience to strengthen their abilities to solve probable future challenges.
On the one hand, advocates of the idea of accepting bad situation may say that people should enjoy the journey and extra efforts to solve the problems or finding new ways may be risky. This means that if trying new ways worsen the situation and spoil the future of a person, it is better to accept the problem and do no action. Furthermore, they point out that people should let time solve the difficulty and try to gain experience because the future may create new opportunities. For example, if a clerk works for a low income in a company, leaving the job for finding better salary may put h/she at risk of missing the job and lack of finding any new position. Therefore, it is better to evaluate all aspects of leaving a job and then try to change situation.
On the other hand, opponents of trying to change the bad situations may consider the mortality of life at first stage, and believe that life is short enough to accept failures. Furthermore, they think that without trying a new experience or any promotion in life, human beings become psychologically ill, meaning they need intrinsically to be more active and create new opportunities in life. Therefore if this instinctive feeling is suspended, they may lose their motivation, but they extremely need it to continue their life normally. Also, human beings are ambitious creatures and always think about better living condition and high quality life. Therefore, forcing thoughts and passions in order to avoid having any risk may cause frustration. For example, in a such high technological world, if everybody accept the failures, the society miss its mobility and the terms of advancement and progress will be disappeared for ever.
To conclude, I tend to side with the opponents of accepting bad situation because human beings life need to be more excited and beneficial enough to let them dare trying new ways on the seek of their ambitions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to be'
Suggestion: to be
...issitudes and this is us whether choose be an adventurer or accept the probable pr...
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Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...e and create new opportunities in life. Therefore if this instinctive feeling is suspend...
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...opportunities in life. Therefore if this instinctive feeling is suspended, they m...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...f accepting bad situation because human beings life need to be more excited and benefi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 6.8 309% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 965.302439024 188% => OK
No of words: 371.0 196.424390244 189% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90296495957 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78485577957 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 106.607317073 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493261455526 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 283.868780488 203% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9086710679 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.928571429 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16012936011 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623693918448 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044620741777 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100933941222 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025479301649 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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