Experts say that law is something that can influence human behaviour. Some people believe in favour of this argument while others don't. This essay is discussing about whether law can change human behaviour or not.
Human beings are chaotic by nature. Without proper law and order in practice, our society cannot ensure the saftey of individuals. For instance, in first world countries where the law on human rights are properly executed, human development index is much higher than that of third world countries. Actually, immigration statistics shows that more and more people want to immigrate to these countries for a better life. So this is how law can positively influence in the life of humans.
Increased adherence on law can be a negative thing too. There are counties in which, the laws are so strict that people want to escape from its iron clutches. Recently, there was a news article regarding a middle eastern girl who wanted to seek asylum in Canada due to her country's outdated dehumanising laws. This is a perfect example how law can negatively influence on one's life.
Although there are negative influence from rules on people's life, a law is a good thing to have. Laws brings order in modern life. All the pros of law outweighs its cons. In conclusion, a good law can affect people's life positively.
- Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve? 71
- Some organisations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. 85
- Some organisations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. 85
- Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve? 71
- Nowadays, it is increasingly more difficult to maintain the right balance between work and other aspects of one’s life, such as leisure time with family members. How important do you think is this balance? Why do people find it hard to achieve? 71
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, regarding, so, third, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97321428571 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56565572237 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3776650388 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.625 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232165655546 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844994373111 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447667258908 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154643554746 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608782852886 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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