Some people believe that schoolchildren should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views on whether or not children should be given homework. While there are some strong arguments against setting homework, I believe that it is still a necessary part of children ‘s education, and it should not be ignored.
It is understandable why some people believe that homework is an unnecessary burden on children. Firstly, there is evidence to support that homework cannot do anything to improve the academic performance of children. In some countries, such as Finland, children are not given homework, and It can be seen that in many international competitions they outperform their counterparts living in countries where having homework is the norm. Secondly, parents believe that school day is already long and leave children too tired to do homework when they return home. Also, many individuals claim that play time is just as beneficial as study time, which can play an important role in the brain development of children. Therefore, children have this right to have some time to play instead of studying.
Despite the reasons mentioned above, I believe that homework plays an important role in the schooling of children. The main role of setting homework is to prepare children to study and solve problems independently. They learn to do their tasks alone and at their own pace. Also, by doing homework, children learn how to apply or use what they have learned at school. For example, by solving math exercises, they learn how to use numbers in their routine activities, including shopping and counting money. Also, I believe that setting homework is important, as children can know about their weaknesses. This situation can let them try to improve skills and correct their mistakes.
In conclusion, in my view, it is true that homework has its own drawbacks, but its benefits outweigh them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 5.60731707317 624% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 965.302439024 159% => OK
No of words: 300.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76658433612 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 106.607317073 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543333333333 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 283.868780488 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2438209878 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1875 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378777984331 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14260629363 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840193791933 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237041663362 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816051408663 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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