People today find their lives more and more dominated by their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
According to others, a lot of people's lives these days revolve around their jobs. I concur with what has been stated.
The cost of living is rising quickly these days, and most people have to work very hard to make ends meet. To pay for their expenses, which include house rent, utility bills, children's school enrollment, and other crucial needs, they must have a high income. Therefore, it makes sense that people would be compelled to work full-time. According to my observations, some people's offices occasionally extend into their homes, leaving them with little time to spend with their families. Nevertheless, they should endeavor to save more money and refrain from making extravagant purchases. Furthermore, the majority of the time, both parents in a family with children must work, either from home or outside the home, because the income of one partner is insufficient.
It is clear that experiencing unstable connections in one's family or living in a situation where affection is dependent on one's performance can also contribute to a person being a workaholic and allowing their job to take over their life.
Working can turn into a coping strategy to assist manage emotions, take the place of unpleasant experiences, and develop a sense of purpose in life. It makes sense that some people would rather engage in work than spend time with their families since they may find that their place of employment is where they may obtain the necessary social respect.
In conclusion, a lot of individuals, in my opinion, are reliant on their jobs and occasionally develop an addiction to them; these circumstances are brought about by a number of factors, as I have already discussed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...at experiencing unstable connections in ones family or living in a situation where a...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wing their job to take over their life. Working can turn into a coping strategy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08214285714 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7391506765 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1980550544 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238808269436 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842636821867 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540275549985 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132046374578 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397830886856 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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