some people think that increasing business and cultural contact between countries bring many positive affect other says it cause loss of the nation identity is discussed both the view and give your opinion.
international business has taken mammoth demensions eversince technology comes in limelight. to my mind ,improving trade with international level and culture connection bring positive influence rather than negative .this essay elucidates both the prospective a along with my slant in the ensuing segments .
First in the foremost ,globalization brings various positive outcomes such as improvement in trade which is precious for the nation's growth .To illustrate ,every nation has not perfect to produce every products. owing to exchange of the production they made strong relations with each other and also able to complete their necessity .For example Arab countries are rich in mineral such as petrol .where as other countries like india has a huge production of grain.owing to this business both countries are able to fulfil their demands .by this they establish wise relation between each other
Hence it has a positive influence on the both nation .
However, owing to this ,it might be reduced the national identity such as spaghetti and pasta which are famous dishes of italy .nowadays this is easily available every street of corner. Nevertheless ,it reduced the cultural barrious. Not only this, it creates the more popularity about the nation, but also reduce the hurdle of cultural contact and it is helpful to become a world as a global village .
To recapitulate,although there are a few weak points to increase business with other nations ,yet it has a numerous benefit, which are necessary for the holistic growth of nation as well as the word. according to my prospective increasing business and culture contact gives a positive inference on the all nations .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, nevertheless, so, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.424390244 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2808988764 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91379763135 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 106.607317073 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 283.868780488 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.109391661 43.030603864 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.666666667 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 36.0 1.69756097561 2121% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247488081022 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100853859182 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067448993338 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143700852142 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559645149983 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 40.7170731707 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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