some people says that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy think other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it discuss both view give opinion.
It is ubiquitously known that advertisement has indispensable influence the sales of goods ever since the modernisation took place. A section of society reckoned that advertising has great impact to export the production to zeinth level whereas other adhere that it is reare impact on the sale process. This eassy shall elucidate both the views along with my slant in ensuing segments.
First and foremost, reason why the adverts are beneficial to lion share of sale that advertising always attract customers when its present by celebrities. To be more percise, the masses think their favourite celebrity also using same product which they shown in advert. For instance Lux soap sold at peak level when Miss Word Aishwarya Rai Bachchan become ambassador of Lux. By advertising people follow advert and they give preference to purchase those product which advert given by their favourite celebrities. furthermore, Children always influenced by adverts as they are innocent they could not understand the reality behind the advert. as they campell their parents to buy that goods which they had watch on television or social site product by their favourite character as Bheem eat laddo which is indian cousine 80/ Indian children like to eat laddu. One moe example, Maggi sale going to increase day by day even this is not as good for a health whereas children like this product due to taste this is more demandable. Hence, hight demand of goods also influence of advert.
However, In this advanced Era the masses are aware about the reality of products. Owing to this, the masses are commonly ignored the advert. To illustrate, due to spread of education people are known to the markting techniques before purchase the goods costumers check on social sits, consumer reviews of those have already used that product. For instance, during watching the movie when advert come then people usually skip the advert as they know the truth behind that. Moreover, It is influenced media the people want to know the logic behind every aspect so they check their product's feature, weakness and then they decide whether they purchase or not. They are not blindly follow adverts as some luxurious and reputed brand never spend money on advert. Constitutively, adverts are going to decline day by day.
To recapitulate, after discussing both the views, I
vehemently voch that although, now people are educated and they are well aware about marketing and this knowing society check the products ingredients and they have not influenced by the advertising yet advertising always has influence on human psychology whether its on women or children whose which always attract the people to purchase the product which launched by the company. The masses are not be aware each and every product very quickly so that's why the advert alwayes playing the indispensable role to sale the product and behind the success of the productions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 477.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11530398323 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58472967618 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505241090147 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 754.2 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.4052637882 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.85 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387491482791 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347709205659 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839868592844 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163293653753 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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