nowadays children spent more time playing computer games than doing sports why is it happening does it have a positive or negative effect on their development .
Gone are the days when children spent more time on outdoor games.However, this attitude has undergone sea changes.Ever since the modernization took place.In this epoch, they spend quality of time on indoor games like video games, computer games rather than sports activities.There are several causative reason behind this means, elucidate ensuing segments.
First and foremost,reason why children invest surplus amount of time on playing computer games that scarcity of sports centre in urban area.To be more precise,In cities there are huge menace shortage of land.Due to congested area A few sports centers are available.Which are not sufficient for all.It is a great cause to eliminated their interest from sports.Secondly,if the children play on narrow streets than their parents feel insecurity.As such,some time while playing the met accident due to traffic on road.Which is harmful for children.By this i means.Owing to this, playing on street create fight with dwellers of that area when while playing their ball hit neighbour's window glass. Which create unnecessary trouble for parents and neighbours.Thus, the parents also want to indulge their children to other activities.Consquently,Computer is the best option for play.Lastly,Availability of various computer games with attractive character motivate them and they create interest more when they win coins and gifts after complete their target.Hence, they attract more on computer games.
However,Outdoor games are not helpful for their physical and mental development.To illustrate,in this scenario offsprings are facing problems.Like wise,obesity, weak eye sight.This is only the reason of less physical involvement in games and too much time spend on screen.Which create various health disease.Not only this,youngster's emotional growth also affected.It is making them more aggressive and unpcients yet these emotional skills they learn from sports participation.When they face defeat,win and they also become good leaders to learn leadership qualities.In this case, i would say more participation in indoor games has negative influence on children's life.Which is great hurdle of their overall development.
To recapitulate,I vehemently voch that,although various causes are responsible to attract children's interest in computer games yet it has huge negative effect on offsprings.It is necessary to motivate them to participate in outdoor games.Which is beneficial for their holistic growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, i mean
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91292134831 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65551549354 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.41995455 49.4020404114 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 421.0 106.682146367 395% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.2 20.7667163134 343% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 54.0 5.01903807615 1076% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286948100695 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165776212751 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041512760455 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173590019243 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527807413007 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.0 13.0946893788 321% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.51 50.2224549098 -35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 11.3001002004 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.18 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.82 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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