Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the information about changes which are done in paradise island from past and current situation of it.
From the overall analysis, it is manifest that there were less facilities present in past whereas in recent time many facilities are added for the people.
After scrutinizing the whole chart, it is clear that, in the past time, there were few things available in the paradise island. But some are still same since past like rocks are outside of North East corner and beach is opposite side of this direction and natural spring is also stable inside of north East region. The pier and boat were replaced by enlarge pier and cruise ship in South West side. Moreover, scientific research station and trees were situated in the south west side but natural spring is remained in North East direction.
Probing further, in recent paradise, many facilities are added for people. Now, in the centre of the island one restaurant is opened it goes in West side where hotel complex is constructed as well swimming pool is also built in North west direction. In bottom of South east side is cycle path and East side cafe. There are somethings which are situated outside, first is scenic lookout in North East side and beach now use for swimming purpose in North west direction.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-30 | ppatel | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-30 | ppatel | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-30 | kaka singh | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-30 | benj212 | 67 | view |
| 2020-01-29 | d.baquan123@gmail.com | 67 | view |
- The chart below shows the amount of money per person per week spent on fast food in Britain. The graph shows the trend in consumption of fast food. 67
- Some people think allowing more public transport is the only way to control traffic problems while others say that there are other ways to handle traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- The table shows the worldwide market share of mobile phone manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. 61
- More and more women leaving their homes for work many people think husband should help their wives in households work What extent do you agree or disagree with these people 74
- The table gives information about the average hours spent per weak in front of the computer by people of different age group in China 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nalysis, it is manifest that there were less facilities present in past whereas in r...
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Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...e whole chart, it is clear that, in the past time, there were few things available in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93273542601 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30024299994 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533632286996 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4055689231 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0176286704457 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00777201687718 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0156597995076 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0149777891413 0.15604864568 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176310353702 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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