Some people believe that beauty is most important in life while others think that it is the talent that matter.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are many aspects which influence the life but certain people consider physical appearance is most essential for life while opposite viewers reckon talent is important than that. This essay will discuss both views and my view in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark upon, there are myriad reason why people think beauty is vital but this essay will explain only main reason. First and foremost is that, if people have good appearance, well dressing sense and some experience then they can get jobs easily because these things show their confidence towards other people. As a result, they can achieve great success earlier than other. For example, model's and actresses who are very beautiful and they get higher success because of their beauty. People attract from the appearance of actress. When models give advertisements of any product then people buy that product and don't care about the quality and harmful effects of that product.
On the other hand, no doubt talent is very important for gaining any type of success because when people have talent then they do work with full concentration and hard work with full determination. Hence, they can get success in their dream field. For instance, Barack Obama, is the first black president of America, because of his talent he got a great success in his life. So that's why beauty doesn't matter to get higher success in life. Moreover, there are many people who get name and fame owing of their talent not with good appearance. Consequently, they have proved that point, success doesn't depend upon the good appearance.
As far as l know, both are important because some experts say that " first impressions is the last impression ".
In epilogue, although beauty is important but we cannot ignore the talent because if people have only good appearance but no knowledge about general things at that time beauty will be useless then talent and knowledge do work there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07476635514 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3837455801 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545171339564 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4796908224 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27356010617 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821142193964 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548200845951 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154075743846 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066225825984 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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