Some people say that reading books is beneficial for children while others favor watching movies. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Children are like raw clay and can be moulded into any shape. Certain people think that children should read books which are beneficial whereas opposite viewers permission to watch movies. This essay will describe both views and give my prospective in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark on, when children read books then they can improve their imagination as well as reading skills. As a result, they can give their best performance in school and books enhance children's mental ability also. Secondly, if children will read books then they can increase their knowledge about each and every topic because books are an ocean of knowledge and good friend of human beings. Consequently, books encourage to children learn more and help to make interest towards study.
On the other hand, no doubt,there are some advantages of gaining knowledge through movie's. Moreover, when children watch movies related to their study then they can learn easily because they watch those things in practical. As a result, they can't forget those things which they have watched in movies. For example, some consider history is difficult subject but when they watch historical films which are related to their study then that subject becomes their favourite subject owing of watching movies which help to understand each and everything easily.
As far as I know, reading books is the best method because some movies distract to children and don't develop children's mantle ability.
In epilogue, undoubtedly both methods are effective because these ways help to children learn more about their study and gain other knowledge instead of academic study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'viewers'' or 'viewer's'?
Suggestion: viewers'; viewer's
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Suggestion: , there
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...se some movies distract to children and dont develop childrens mantle ability. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for example, no doubt, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31923076923 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39037455905 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6442968831 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276853091168 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10838124882 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541148332577 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160123616482 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059438126922 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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