Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart illustrates fluctuation of producted oil output from 1990 to 2010 measured in millons of VBarrels per day.
Overall, it’s clear that there was a gradual increase in oil production capacity over the period of 20 years. Saudi Arabia got the highest figures in oil output during 20 years meanwhile the lowest numbers of oil production capacity was in Qatar.
In the first 10 years, from 1990 to 2000, the oil production rose dramatically to around 0.5 millions in most nations except from UAE where this figure remained about 2.5 millons of VBarrels per day.Saudi Arabia was accounted for the highest number of approximately 8.5 millions in 1990. In constract, Qatar was lowest number with only about 0.5 millons in 1990.
In the next decade, the figure for Saudi Arabia increased significantly at around 5 millons from approximately 9.5 millions to 14.5 millions in 2000 and 2010 respectively. Nevertheless, the oil production capacity decreased slightly at around 0.2 millions from 2000 to 2010 in Qatar. In the other hand, the oil production increase consitently at the average level in Iran, Iraq, Kuwait and UAE

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Saudi
...d about 2.5 millons of VBarrels per day.Saudi Arabia was accounted for the highest nu...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the lowest'.
Suggestion: was the lowest
...5 millions in 1990. In constract, Qatar was lowest number with only about 0.5 millons in 1...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11891891892 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79054021334 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524324324324 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2326506041 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.375 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00849584249049 0.215688989381 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00318572791554 0.103423049105 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00842864380924 0.0843802449381 10% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00515094817431 0.15604864568 3% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00892170394507 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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