The world’s natural resources are being consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?
It’s commonly argued that the comsumption of the world’s natural resources is increasing to a dangerous level. There are variety of potential risks and solutions should be proposed immediately to resolve the serious issuses which have risen.
Natural resources which have being over exlploited, effect directly to human’s healthy and industry’s development in the future. One negative impact from overcomsumption is that cause uncanny diseases which we have ever seen before. For example, millions of children in Africa have died every years, and also hundreds of animals have been on the verge of extinction due to lack of water. Another danger is that future industries will be disrupted because of lack of ingredients for energy. This aspect was well known as depleted petrol in transportation.
These risks demand solutions from both each country and national organization, and also individual perception . The government should foster experiment and comsumption for alternative resources. Instead of comsuming oil for manufacture industry products, we can use the fresh resources as wind or sun energy. The government can also impose the higher tax on the use of these resources to guarantee higher responsibility from consumers.
In consclusion, there are more and more dangers which impact on our life because of ever - increased rate in consuming world resources. Therefore, human need to have stronger action to tackle this problem before it’s beyond our control.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61233480176 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06342382176 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638766519824 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5228706536 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240900267413 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811692210503 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782335385562 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15213495062 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664740668015 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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