The consumption of the world’s r to resources ( oil, and water ect.), is increasing at the dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?
It’s widely that the amount of using in world’s resources as oil,water and ect have being rised to an alarm level. There are variety of reasons behind this declaration and several solutions should be proposed to address some of the serious issuses which have been arisen.
There are two primary reasons why the resources all over the world have been more and more declined. The one reason is that human obtain a considerable increase in living standard, therefore, demands for higher services which comsume a lot of resources increase rapidly. For example, the birth of some new mean of transportations as mortobike made a significant contribution to the world consumption of oil. Another reason is conscious’s publicity in saving resources. Many people waste water everyday in frequently way without concerning about that.
Measures must be taken by national governments and international organizations to solve this problem. Firstly, government should promote experiments in alternating natural resources by wind, sun or even nuclear energy which aim to reduce the amout of oil used. Secondly, international organizations in term of environment or natural resources have to indicate the urgent phenomenon in wasting water as well as its consequences towards human’s life.
In consclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for dangerous rise in comsumption of world’s resources and strict step need to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53571428571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.158039627 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3696677723 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.727272727 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266776772817 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889719504697 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622321610235 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152553583131 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344217885097 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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