The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in 5 different countries in 2002.
The comparison of three main consumer spending in five different countries during 2002 was illustrated in this table. Overall, the expenditure in dietary and tobacco witnessed the highest percentage, and Turkish’s consumption was the huge proportion compared to the rest of nations.
People who spent their expenditure for leisure and education purposes was a very small number, and the smallest percentage was in Spain (1.98%). The differences among the countries were only a slight proportion. Besides that, it was a minority who purchased for clothing and footwear whereby Italian spent about 9%, while the percentage of Turkish, Spanish, Irish and Swedish was less than one in ten.
However, this contrasted to the necessary of dietary and tobacco which experienced the highest percentage (no less than a fifth) in five countries. Although, the proportion of food, beverages and tobacco for Turkish and Irish were the highest, 32.14% and 28.91% respectively, while other countries just about no more than 19%.
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. 73
- Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better careers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- Some people argue that space exploration had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with this?How do you think space exploration will change in the future? 61
- The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the most likely it is that people will want to buy it. To what extent does price influence potential buyers? What other factors influence people to buy a product? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50632911392 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89943195405 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9568049647 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.285714286 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135892578544 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786198394188 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102665236902 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971426977109 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576044301392 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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