The table below gives information about the values NZ of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below gives information about the values (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows earnings measured in NZ$ from kiwi exportation from New Zealand to five different nations in three consecutive years 2010, 2011 and 2012.
Overall, the export of kiwi fruit to Japan, China and Russia was on the rise while the opposite was true in Mexico and Saudi Arabia. In addition, Japan and China were the leading importers of New Zealand’s kiwi fruit among the 5 countries.
In 2010, Japan was the largest market of kiwi fruit from New Zealand, with $271.1 million of exportation to this country, followed by $74.9 million of exports to China. New Zealand exported $6 million and just under $ million of kiwi to Mexico and Russia, respectively, while the figure for Saudi Arabia was by far the lowest at $290,000.
In the next 2 years, the exports to Japanese market soared to around $325 million, while there was about $20 million more value of kiwi fruit exported to China. Also, the money of exports to Russia almost doubled to approximately $2.4 million in 2012, whereas the number of Mexico nearly halved to $3.3 million. In contrast, the exporting value of Saudi Arabia increased to $407,000 in 2011 then decreased dramatically to $82,000 in 2012.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...exports to China. New Zealand exported million and just under $ million of kiwi to Mex...
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...land exported million and just under $ million of kiwi to Mexico and Russia, respectiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47576306168 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.8053023203 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.75 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243510277853 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126518226616 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784505896898 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178610778522 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746093776851 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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