The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The provided table illustrates how people of five countries (Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and turkey) spent their money on 3 different categories (food/drinks/tobacco, clothing/footwear, and leisure/education) in the year 2002. Overall, the majority of expenditure went to food, drinks, and tobacco, whereas leisure and education accounted for the smallest portion.

According to the chart, in terms of food/drinks/tobacco, 32.14% of the expenditure was made by Turkey citizens, twice as much as those from Sweden and higher than those from Ireland by approximately 2%. Meanwhile, Spain consumers accounted for 18.80% of the national consumption of food, drinks, and tobacco, around 2% higher than the figure for Italy.

It can also be seen that while Italians spent the most on clothing and footwear out of the citizens of the five countries, accounting for 9% of national expenditure, a similar figure of around 6% could be seen in the clothing and footwear consumption by consumers living in Ireland, Spain and turkey. In comparison, leisure and education expenditure by people of the 5 nations clustered between 1.98% and 4.35%, placing this category in the 3rd rank.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'categories'' or 'category's'?
Suggestion: categories'; category's
...turkey spent their money on 3 different categories food/drinks/tobacco, clothing/footwear,...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46153846154 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39866144972 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587912087912 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0954366731 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.666666667 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092283906073 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456074671133 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701490039899 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659959751645 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542974700493 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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