The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the total number of visitors before and after the refurbishment of Ashdown Museum and the chart provides information on the outcomes of a survey conducted during the two stages of the museum to know about visitor satisfaction.
Overall, it is clear that the number of visitors increased after the refurbishment of the museum. Furthermore, the number of dissatisfied visitors dropped instantly as well as on-third of the visitors were very satisfied after the museum was renovated.
In terms of visitors, the total number of yearly visitors rose dramatically from 74000 to 92000 after the museum was refurbished. Before the refurbishment, the number of very satisfied people were only 15. This value rose significantly to a high of 35 after the refurbishment.
On the other hand, the number of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied people declined to 15 and 5 respectively after the refurbishment. Similarly, only 38 people were satisfied before the refurbishment took place, however, this figure increased to a total of 40 since its refurbishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, similarly, third, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40476190476 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3016349966 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494047619048 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1413210223 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333676434196 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152578963033 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999327915595 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219362182636 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937940778418 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.