the table compared the amount of money that 4 car companies in the UK spent on different kinds of advertisements in 2002.
interestingly, while there was a clear distinction among the investment for almost every type of promotion, radio spending was on the other hand when attracted 15 million dollars of advertising from all four companies.
it is clear that TV promotion, considered as the most efficient method when received the majority advertisement budget of Cetizine company with 70 million dollars, followed by Vauxhall and Renault companies with 65 and 59 million dollars respectively, while only 45 million dollars invested by Rover company. by contrast, there was a lack of enthusiasm when Rover and Cetirizine companies refused to invest and only 11 million dollars from both Renault and Vauxhall companies.
besides the use of television channels for promoting, there was a difference in the amount of money spent on press activities in Renault and Rover companies with 45 and 38 million dollars respectively from only 20 million dollars invested by a group of Vauxhall and Cetirizine companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, thus, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32768361582 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01133653426 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4936876607 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.6 112.824112599 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 22.9334400587 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149348425547 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117058139517 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133002580916 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13600728183 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142353817566 0.0819641961636 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 61.2550243902 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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