The table below shows the figures (in thousand) for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar graph illustrates the number of prisoners in 5 countries such as Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, United State and Canada.
The statistic shows the figures for imprisonment in Great Britain are gradually increase it the past 6 decades the number started from 25,000 to 82, 000. In contrast, prisoners in Canada are slowly decrease there were 120,000 prisoners in year 1930 and in next 60 years the number dropped to 88,000 prisoners.
On the other hand, number of criminal in United State always on the top range compared to another 4 countries, during the year 1930 to 1980 US had highest prisoner and the number of prisoner never went down below 100,000. In the year 1980 it hit the peak of 140,000 criminals in United State.
Nonetheless, for Australia and New Zealand had the same statistic where the trend fluctuates the number of prisoners of both countries during 60 years are less than 100,000 imprisonments. To illustrate further detail of number of criminal in Australia and Canada in the year of 1980 there were 45,000 and 85,000 prisoners respectively.
In conclusion, it can be seen that the overall number of imprisonments in 5 countries are accretion, the number of prisoners started from the year 1930 the total around 400,000 and by the year of 1980 the number of prisoners’ increased by 32,000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...isonment in Great Britain are gradually increase it the past 6 decades the number starte...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'decreased'.
Suggestion: decreased
...ontrast, prisoners in Canada are slowly decrease there were 120,000 prisoners in year 19...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
...ntries, during the year 1930 to 1980 US had highest prisoner and the number of prisoner nev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
nonetheless, so, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00892857143 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79097488637 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513392857143 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.780787943 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.25 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101811046477 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563867721597 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346329578417 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647741463059 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215320671136 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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