The bar chart illustrates the distribution of the number of detainees calibrated in thousands among five different countries. The data is mapped for 50 years starting from year 1930 to 1980.
Overall, Canada had the highest number of prisoners in 1930 while Great Britain had the least, but after 50 years, the figure of incarceration decreased in Canada and United States had the highest prisoners.
In the year 1930, Great britain had the least number of prisoners compared to the rest of countries by almost 40000. However, after 50 years the figure had rose sharply reaching 100000 in 1980.
Moreover, Australia and New Zealand had observed a considerable fluctuations in the number of jailers starting from 1930. It was observed that there was a substantial drop in the number of prisoners till 1950 for both the countries and a slight increase thereafter for New Zealand until 1980 marking the total count under 10000. Meanwhile, Australia had seen a dramatic fluctuations in its figure in the last three decades by reaching almost 60000 in 1980.
Countries like USA and Canada had also shown variance in the number of prisoners over the years. USA had the maximum number of prisoners reaching almost 140000 in 1980.
Meanwhile, Canada was observed to have maximum prisoners in the year 1930 but over the period of time it was decreased under 10000 in the last 50 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03463203463 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61956633266 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471861471861 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0923130714 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.727272727 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172610722156 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770972893795 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341367192202 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975676991003 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525187489271 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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