the table below shows information about age, average in come per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The average salary of each person and the under common property population of the three states of America are fully illustrated in the table. Overall, the under 18 years old of Utah distribute all most double the two rest of California and Florida.
Firstly, the average income in the three states is nearly the same, California stays on the top one with 23 thousand dollars per person, Florida is lower one step with less than a thousand. and a Utah person just only makes 17,000 Dollars on average.
Secondly, the summary of two ages out of working period is precisely 30, 36, 39 percentage in order of California, Utah, and Florida. In California, young people make 4% more than the elder. However, it is about 20% difference belongs to under mature people at Utah state. But, in Florida, the more percentage belongs to the older with 23% distributing to the income of the state.
Thirdly, the number of low-income people in the states is 16% respectively in California and less than 10% in Utah, and 12% in Florida.
- the table below shows information about age average in come per person and population below poverty line in three state in the USA summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the culture or artworks from other countries Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it Others think students should spend time on important subjects Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the culture or artworks from other countries Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- the table below shows information about age average in come per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 49
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79213483146 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55543883569 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2795785038 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7777777778 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114305471571 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515021531169 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399431365121 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706813731609 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312710810546 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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