Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing
the culture or artworks from other countries.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
In this day and age, museums and art galleries play a very important role in the preservation of cultural heritage. Many people believe that even though the exhibition of international artworks contributes a huge economic value, the government should pay more concentration on the domestic arts.
From one angle, no one could deny that the novelty of foreign exhibitions always makes a mesmeric effect on citizens. Combining domestic and international scales where displays a various range of items by artist all around the world, it would be a wise idea to attract more visitors and increase reputation and wealth of the country. To consolidate, the museum protecting one of the world-class paintings, the Mona Lisa, located in Paris, captures the interest of floods of tourism annually; Despite the Italian origin of the paint. Millions of dollars, as a result, are enabled a high level of revenue to France budget by tax payment.
From a completely differing angle, other people and I are of the opinion that cultural contents should be claimed more focus in arts and heritages by government, to teach their citizens about cultural identity. Whenever the people arrive at the museum to see domestic items, their pride about the long country - history would be preserved and strongly enhanced. This is due to traditions, customs of a community from past to present is often depicted through local artworks, Vietnam National Museum about History, presenting crafts and sculptures throughout certain dynasties, is an example. A sense of patriotism can be cultivated. For visitors, regardless of ethnicity and
regional origins, deepening their insight into the national culture. What is more, domestic audiences can provide the nation's people with a comprehensive understanding and sense of empathy for the ancestors' sacrifice. War Remnants Museum in Saigon, which specializes in the study of the American invasion and its devastating impact on civilians, is an essential place for those who want to explore war atrocities and stories of victims. By witnessing all the screens, photos, and documents in museums, visitors can understand how respectable and resilient the Vietnamese people are soldiers and civilians, aware that what we inherit now is through blood and bone devotion of previous generations.
In conclusion, protecting domestic heritages always plays a vital role in the length of country development. In the foreseeable future, sacrificed comprehension and empathy among people of a country will be able to understand by inheritors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in conclusion, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41854636591 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98682000629 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598997493734 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5693874815 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.125 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146155596486 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416694640563 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522854826878 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794026096595 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642424903583 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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