The table below shows key data on the demographics of four different countries

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The table below shows key data on the demographics of four different countries.

The table compares four different countries in terms of population, GDP per capita and average life expectancy.

Overall, the most populous nation is China, but this country has the lowest GDP per person, while the US has the highest economic output per capita, but the lowest life expectancy.

As can be seen from the table, China has a total population of over 1.3 billion, followed by the US with the figure being significantly lower, at nearly 319 million. The population in the UK is the lowest, at only around 65 million, half the figure of Russia. In terms of GDP per capita, the US has the largest number, at nearly $54,000, while the lowest figure is recorded in China, just about $6,800. GDP per person in the UK is approximately $41,800, almost double that of Russia.

According to the table, life expectancy, on average, of people in the UK is highest, at 81.5 years, while that of Americans is lowest only 69.2 years. The figures for China and Russia are 75.2 and 72.3 years respectively.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... figure is recorded in China, just about ,800. GDP per person in the UK is approxi...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the lowest'.
Suggestion: is the lowest
... at 81.5 years, while that of Americans is lowest only 69.2 years. The figures for China ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74285714286 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53932981678 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4786872827 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0578481359218 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331448800329 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753200064543 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662897600658 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956506173518 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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