The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.
The given statistics illustrates information about the a mount of
money was spent in six different items by a family in Australia per
month. Units is measured by Australian dollar.
Overall, it can be seen that the total money spent by Australian
family on different items increased in most category. Also, electricity
and water were by far the highest expenditure.
Looking at the data in more detail, it is evident that the family
of Australian allocated 75 dollars per month on electricity and water
in 1990 and 120 dollars in 2001. In term of food and housing
expenditure soared by 5 dollars per month each. Moreover,
they spent 250 and 270 dollars on non-essential goods and services in
1991 and 2001 respectively.
Turning to the other two items, in term of clothing, there was a sudden
decrease which was 30 dollars in 1991 and 20 dollars in 2001.Also, the
second least a mount of money was allocated on transport, with 70 and
45 dollars monthly in 1991 and 2001 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Expenditure
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08823529412 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84713782098 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7380063185 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.125 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 3.83414634146 417% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211307531487 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921881966774 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417526431306 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784149570842 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747605149554 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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