The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table illustrates how many medals were won by the ten greatest nations in the London 2012 Olympic Games.

Looking at the table, it is immediately obvious that US, China and Russia won the largest number of total medals including gold, silver and bronze, while Hungary, Italy and South Korea had the opposite quantity in total.

A closer look at data reveals that in terms of gold medals, US was the nation with the highest number of about 46, followed by China with the figure of 38. Great Britain registered the third greatest number, at 29. Similarly, US and China were the top two countries winning the largest figures of Silver medals (29 and 27 respectively), but the third in this term was Russia. However, according to the report of bronze ones, Russia won the highest number of 32, which was 3 and 9 higher than that of US and China in turn.

As can be seen from the table, the numbers of gold medals won by Italy, Hungary and Australia were the lowest , each of them was under 9. On the other hand, the fewest quantities of silver medals were registered by Italy, Hungary and South Korea, which was similar to the record of bronze medals.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...Australia were the lowest , each of them was under 9. On the other hand, the fewe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, similarly, so, third, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59615384615 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24374877224 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581730769231 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7900032134 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16840455535 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836756141341 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773028658217 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125037090457 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896005506751 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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