The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.

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The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.

The table demonstrates the proportion of people in one town who rode bicycles in five age groups. Overall, it is clear that the percentage of female was higher than male in all ages and the percentage of both genders in the age group of 18-39 and 40-59 were lower than other age groups.

In an age group of 0-9, the proportion of female is approximately 51% while another gender was less than 1 percent compared with female. There was a decrease in the percentage of both female and male in the age group 10-17 which were slightly fell to 42.2% and 24.6%, respectively.

The 18-39 and 40-59 years old are the two groups that had a lower percentage of people using bicycles. In the age group from 18 to 39, the percentage of female was 17.1%, while the proportion of men was accounted for under 10%. Between the ages 40 to 59, the figures pointed out that the percentage of both genders still decreased to over 12% for women and 8% for men.

However, the last ages group of those who older than 60 years old revealed a significant increase and reached 18.5 for women and 13.2% for men.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50753768844 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41120168973 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51256281407 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5271087757 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263970359524 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137408263743 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100930332057 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173191955286 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101868330648 0.0819641961636 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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