The table below shows the percentages of people joining in seven different sports in a European country from 1999 to 2009.
Given is the table illustrating the modification of the attendance in seven kinds of sport happened in a country between 1999 and 2009.
It is clear from the table that football always received the highest percentage of the seven types of sport. By contrast, yoga was the category having a small number of people attended and seemed unchanged during the research time.
Standing at the highest point (57%) in 1999, football steadily decreased but it always occupied the largest proportion, while, 32% people swam in 1999, it just increased slightly to 34% and flattened out after 2004. Although tennis did not have the high number of players, it continued a stable climb with slight acceleration from 25% to 33%.
As can be seen, there is a mere minority of golf and volleyball; however, they jumped further to 17% and 18% respectively in 2009. Basketball accounted for 26% in 1999 and it experienced a decrease of 26% to 2% of the number of sportsmen in 2009. At the same time, yoga had only 10% in the first 5 years, then, it had a slight lull to 13% in five year’s time.
- Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The table below shows the result of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club s activities facilities and opening hours Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make any comparisons wher 52
- Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- In many parts of the world girls and boys are educated together in co educational or mixed schools Some people think that girls and boys benefit from being educated separately in single sex schools To what extent do you agree or disagree 66
- Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development overweight the disadvantages? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
... contrast, yoga was the category having a small number of people attended and seemed unchanged du...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74736842105 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66070200888 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1999599359 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240924756403 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102089911197 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101529204401 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157599799981 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908944673142 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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