Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about parents can organize child-minding while they are busy or working. While there are some benefits of sending offsprings to children organizations, I would argue that it is better for children to be looked after by grandparents.
To embark on, there are many advantages when taking children to childcare centers. One benefit is that such centers are professional because they are trained to have expertise about child-minding. For example, when children are fallen or hurt, staffs will give them first aid tactfully. Therefore, offsprings will be taken education or health into account. Another benefit is that children will have the chance to mix with their peers, this leads to the fact that they will have social skills.
However, it can not deny the fact that children will be received more love from their grandparents. Firstly, no one has better babysitting skills than grandparents since they took care of the children's parents. For instance, grandparents know how to calm the baby down. Secondly, as the members of the family, grandparents have a strong affection for their grandchildren. As a result, they swarming with their time for children than childcare staff members.
In conclusion, while there are viewpoints of offering children to childcare centers has some positive effects, grandparents are also the good choice for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34862385321 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87922884774 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7931726423 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215317895437 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780812628517 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432934805088 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137717478545 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233367714867 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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