The table below shows the population figures for 4 countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates the number of people in 4 nations in 2003 and in the 2 future years: 2025 and 2050.
Overall, the figures for population will grow in all of the countries, except for Italy. It is also noticeable that Indonesia is the country with the highest population during the 3 years.
In the first year, Argentina was ranked last at 34 million. In contrast, Indonesia was at the top level with 238 million. The numbers of Italian and Korean nationals were 20 and 14 million more than that of Argentina respectively.
In the years 2025 and 2050, the populations of all the nations will experience an increase, apart from Italy. Indonesia will still be at the top position with an increase of around 100 million in the third year. Argentina will grow by 14% each year, but Korea will maintain the same figure of 52 million during the two years. In contrast, Italy will experience a gradual decrease, making it the country with the fewest population of all the 4 in 2050.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...the figures for population will grow in all of the countries, except for Italy. It is also...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... highest population during the 3 years. In the first year, Argentina was ranked ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, still, third, apart from, except for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66857142857 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55578735023 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8336266646 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.7 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162627419149 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710826477141 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848923349708 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117787728767 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922689548926 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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