The table below shows the salaries of secondary high school teachers in 2009

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The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.

The given table illustrates the data on salaries that secondary or high school lecturers earned in five distinct countries in 2009. 

As can be seen from the table, teachers in Luxembourg registered the most well-paid, while the opposite was recorded in Australia. In terms of time to get the highest salary, teachers in Denmark took the shortest time. 

As is illustrated, the salary paid for teachers in Luxembourg started at 80,000 dollars per year. In Denmark, the figure for teachers was remarkably lower than in Luxembourg (47,000 dollars), while in other countries it was just about 30,000 dollars. 

At least 15 years of experience, Luxembourg still had the highest salary with 112,000 dollars per teacher, while teachers in Denmark and Korea at the same level of experience earned 54,000 dollars and 52,600 dollars respectively. The maximum salary in Luxembourg was 139,000 dollars, by contrast, teachers in Australia and Denmark were paid approximately 48,000 to 54,000 dollars. It is worth noting that tutors in Australia and Denmark need just about 10 years to reach the top salary, while other countries had to wait for 30 years or more. 

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, still, well, while, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2192513369 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70719251324 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566844919786 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0379227693 43.030603864 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.2 112.824112599 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4 22.9334400587 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177783010897 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109722979704 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978629640895 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148742805701 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129061923568 0.0819641961636 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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