The table below shows the sales by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.
The table provides the sales information of tge coffee shop which was present in an office building on a normal weekday. From the general perspective, the sales of pastries was highest in the morning shift compared to other items in the shop and lowest sold item was tea during all most all times of the day.
In the time period of 7.30 to 10.30, the maximum sold food was pastries of about 275, which was followed by beverage particularly coffee sold was 265 and the least was sandwitches. In contrast to this, considering another time period 10.30 to 2.30, the major fast food sold was sandwitches of about 185, selling of tea being the least of the time. Taking the next time period in to consideration, the highest sold item was pastries followed by coffee which was before sandwiches and again tge least sold beverage was tea. Final time period of the day gives information on coffee being the most sold product of avout 200 and least sold was tea.
In conclusion, during the different time periods of the day the major sold beverage was coffee and least was tea at all time periods except in the morning shift.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uring all most all times of the day. In the time period of 7.30 to 10.30, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6432160804 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3804460869 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442211055276 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.1720609617 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 132.0 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108500563621 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911471438343 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150986694425 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113070184643 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118642543951 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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